Fictionalized retelling

Something She Could Work With

Inspired by Edmonia Lewis

A work of fiction inspired by a real person. Scenes, conversations, thoughts and connecting events may be invented. This is not a documented account of their life or a historical match to yours.

Content note: Fiction about artistic uncertainty and wanting substantive feedback. The historical background mentions racially condescending praise; no slurs or violence.

Before you read

The visitor is an invented character, not Lydia Maria Child or Edward Brackett. The studio visit, clay study, uneven ear, discussion, revisions and private thoughts are invented. The source records Lewis requesting criticism, not receiving this critique or improving a work because of it.

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Documented background and what we invented

Documented background

These references support only the background below. They are not evidence that the fictional scenes or conversations happened.

In a letter published in 1864, Lydia Maria Child reported meeting Edmonia Lewis and discussing her work as a young sculptor.
Source: Letter from L. Maria Child — The Liberator, February 19, 1864
Child reported that Lewis objected to praise based on her race and asked for faults in her work to be identified so she could learn.
Source: Letter from L. Maria Child — The Liberator, February 19, 1864

What we invented

About the references

Letter from L. Maria Child — The Liberator, February 19, 1864. Printed page 31, column 3: the reported reception conversation and invitation to inspect a bust. It does not establish that a later studio visit or critique took place.